House of the Dead

February 28, 2010

Impact Pt I

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 1:00 am

Impact Pt I
Impact Pt I (2008)

IMDB rating: 5.70

Plot: While the entire world watches the largest meteor shower in 10,000 years, a rogue asteroid, hidden by the meteor field, smashes into the moon in a tremendous explosion of rock and debris. Fragments from the asteroid, and even from the moon itself, penetrate Earth’s atmosphere and make impact. Even though the initial damage is minimal, nerves are frayed throughout the planet. There is significant physical damage to the lunar surface, but experts quickly conclude there will be no lasting ramifications. Then strange anomalies begin to manifest themselves on Earth. It starts small – cell phone disruptions, unusual static charges and odd tidal behavior. The world’s leading scientists, including Alex Kittner, Maddie Rhodes and Roland Emerson, begin piecing together evidence that suggests the moon’s properties, and its orbit, may have been permanently altered. Their fears are realized when the anomalies increase to the point where the effect of “simulated” gravity is being manipulated by increased electromagnetic surges coming from the moon. People, cars and other objects are rendered momentarily weightless in random, isolated areas around the globe. Alex, Maddie, Roland and the rest of their team soon discover something far worse – the moon’s new orbit has put it on a collision course with Earth! The world now has 39 days to stop it or Earth, and all of mankind, will perish. After a failed attempt by the United States to destroy the moon, our heroes bring all the countries of the world together in one last hope for humanity – an international mission to the moon itself where astronauts will attempt to reverse the magnetic effects and restore the moon to its original orbit. Alex, whose children are now missing after the latest rampage of anti-gravity, is emotionally torn as he must now join Roland and two other astronauts on the Earth saving mission into space. It is a race against time as the two celestial bodies are drawn closer and closer to impact, the world united, watching and praying, the survival of mankind in the balance.

Impact Pt I

Directors: Rohl Mike

Actors: Elliott David James,Sadler Benjamin,Cromwell James,Culp Steven,Best Owen,Tso Yee Jee,Cunningham Colin,Kopsa Michael,Lea Ron,Ayres Benjamin,Plunkett Gerard,Action,Adventure,Sci-Fi,

Who is at fault in this car crash scenario?
I was making a left turn to go into the college campus.I was traveling SOUTH as I approached the solid green light, and I waited for ~ 3-4 minutes until traffic cleared. I see a purple pt cruiser enter the campus through a RIGHT TURN ONLY lane and it is coming from the south (so the direction its headed in, is north), behind it approximately 15-20 feet is a honda accord that is in the TURN ONLY LANE as well and it looked as if it was going to turn into the school. It was too close to the intersection to change lanes so i start entering the turn. the honda accord hit the right side of my car at where the front wheel is and smashed the wheel into the body of the car. the police arrogantly told me i was at fault and did not look around to check the possible speed or anything. the other driver claimed that the speed they were traveling in was 40 mph. mind you my whole right front side was completely destroyed and my car is totaled from the impact. the police looked up the wrong tag and told me that this tag was not belonging to my car- (she typed in the wrong characters.) Then she made out the ticket to my father who is the one who owns the vehicle; but he was not in the accident, he was at work. i was put down as fault, but i do not see how if the other driver was going straight on a turn only lane and trying to change at the intersection it is my fault. who would be at fault if it was taken to court? thank you. there were no witnesses also..
I am in Florida.
The driver is not from my town she probably does not know the roads. She lives approximately 30-45 miles from where the accident happened.


People get confused. There are two types of "fault". One type is where you receive a citation for a traffic violation, that fault is determined by a judge when/if you go to court on the charge. (in your case I would recommend you going and pleading your case) The other "fault" is to determine who pays for damages in case of an accident. Insurance companies determine the second kind of fault based on police reports, witness reports and driver(s) statements. One type of fault has nothing necessarily to do with the other type. It is true that insurance companies place a great deal of weight based on the police report. However, if you don’t agree with their findings, you can appeal. Appeals almost never are successful though. No one here can determine either type of fault. Good luck

Entidtil | Apr 05, 2009


If he was in the turn only lane and then went straight and hit you he should be at fault. If your left turn was a left turn yield on green it would be your fault. I had a hard time understanding what you are trying to explain.
T_B | Apr 05, 2009


Unfortunately in an accident like this, if i were the officer i would have cited both of you and had you pay for your own damages. Why, you had to cross an oncoming lane therefore you didn’t give right of way or waited until the road was clear before making your move. The other driver made a simple error but also made a lane change in an intersection. People go straight out of a right turn lane all the time. A simple error but since you were turning you had to give way. Sorry.

Also, your father should not be ticketed, you should. Check with the officer’s supervisor to see if she made an error.
Tuff D | Apr 05, 2009


From your description, in your situation, you cannot turn across oncoming traffic which you did. If that car (that hit you), actually made the right turn, you would have been in conflict with the driver anyway and may have hit them in the driver’s side. It’s a timing issue. You had to be into your turn for the other driver to have hit you as described. If they went ahead and made their right turn, how close would you have been to hitting them in their driver’s side?

Always presume the other driver will do the unexpected. Just because you have a green light doesn’t mean you have the absolute right of way into an intersection. Just because a driver has their turn signal on, doesn’t mean the will make the indicated turn.

I would be interested in the town and the intersection that this accident occurred. I’m not a lawyer.
Dan B | Apr 05, 2009

February 26, 2010

Danny the Dog

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 8:03 pm

Danny the Dog
Danny the Dog (2005)

IMDB rating: 7.10

Plot: A man treated like a dog and raised as a fighting machine his entire life, ends up in a coma and is taken in the care of good people, but his sinister owner is looking to retrieve his most prized possession: a non stop human weapon triggered by the collar leashed on his neck.

Online Movies World

Directors: Leterrier Louis

Actors: Li Jet,Freeman Morgan,Hoskins Bob,Regan Vincent,Brown Dylan,Hassan Tamer,Jenn Michael,Lambert Michael Ian,Chou Puthirith,Theng Tony,Lay Owen,Thriller,Drama,Crime,Action,

good good movies worth watching with amessage, or some inspiration or motavation?
ilike some movies that are purely for entertainment purposes but iwant to see a good movie that has a meaning, or story worth tellin or listening to, inspirational or motavational

blood diamon
pursuit of happiness
never back down
danny the dog aka unleashed

any similar movies???


Ed Wood- watch if you have any nterest in any creative career. It’s also hilarious.
Rob | Nov 02, 2009


Gran Torino
Radio
We Are Marshall
Cat Lover | Nov 02, 2009


Burn after reading.
jitqop | Nov 02, 2009


I love older movies like Dead Poet’s Society, Good Will Hunting, Rudy, Remember The Titans.
What about Into The Wild? I enjoyed the book. I know I watched the movie but it’s been some time now.
Forrest Gump, October Sky, Saved, Erin Brokovich.
The Color Purple.
Freedom Writers.
Million Dollar Baby, Gran Torino.
I really need to watch newer movies- haha.
Rae | Nov 02, 2009


Conrack
Miss Potter
My Left Foot
Sergeant York
The Right Stuff
10 Items or Less
To Sir, With Love
The Station Agent
My Brilliant Career
Home by Christmas
The Christmas Choir
To Kill a Mockingbird
Take the Lead (2006)
Up the Down Staircase
Music of the Heart (1999)
Something the Lord Made
The World’s Fastest Indian
Mrs. Palfrey at the Claremont
The Inn of the Sixth Happiness
Homeless to Harvard: The Liz Murray Story
MystMoonstruck | Nov 03, 2009

Confessions of a Window Cleaner

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 4:15 pm

Confessions of a Window Cleaner
Confessions of a Window Cleaner (1974)

IMDB rating: 2.50

Plot: Young Timmy starts as a window cleaner in the little company of his brother. Soon he learns that some female customers expect additional service. Young and curious as he is, he reluctantly accepts the juicy duty. However his heart belongs to Liz, who demands the highest commitment until she lets him go all the way.

Directors: Guest Val

Actors: Askwith Robin,Booth Anthony,Maynard Bill,Le Mesurier John,Wattis Richard,Kydd Sam,Hall Brian,Comedy,

weird dream…old job, cheating, confession, confused.?
So I had this strange dream, and out of curiosity I was wondering if someone could shed some light on it:

I was with my boyfriend on our bikes, dropping me off at a workplace I just quit. Somehow I had another shift I wasn’t fully aware of.

When we got to work I was early. I left and hung out downtown. We headed back. We met someone (his acquaintance in real life) who I just met the day before I started the dream and when I said he is nice and we should hang out with him and his wife, he said that this guy always uses the excuse that he is "busy with friends".

On the way to work we were going up this forested hill I do not recognize, bikes in tow. It was lovely.

When I got to the job, a birthday party just finished and one girl was cleaning up. there was colourful on all things, the windows/computers. There was cake too. I arrived at 5:30 but was supposed to start at 3, so I was late. Everything was changed there. Different set up, new things. Some girl asked me to do something I was never taught to do, so I didn’t do it as she didn’t explain it to me. I got into a little snippy argument with the cleaning employee.

This is the stranger I can’t fully recall if I was at the workplace or a strange version of home, but somehow my boyfriend’s friend’s father was there and I cheated on my boyfriend. I was going to be driven by this stranger (can’t recognize the person) to a city 3 hours away to "hook up" and then he would ride me home, the city my boyfriend was born in. I said I couldn’t as I fully thought of Don.

I went to Don and started messaging him online about it, and then realized we were pretty much side by side. Someone else was at our place. I went over to him and told him I cheated, the details, and that I said no in the end. He seemed very nice and pleasant it, was glad I left the situation. and I think I started to doze off in the dream. When I realized no real resolution was reached or full expression of his feelings were expressed, I noticed he had just gone back to using the computer. I was going to prompt him but I woke up.

I know this is long winded, but I am genuinely interested in an opinion on this. Thanks.
I would appreciate interesting, detailed responses. I don’t do this often, and I wouldn’t be asking it if I wasn’t curious about dream interpretation…and it can be fun too. Thanks.


IT’S JUST A DREAM!!!

SexyMama | May 28, 2009


1) People are irrelevant. They are only fillers.
2) It really only depends how you FELT in the dream. Pretty =much were you happy, content, angry, or sad about getting to work late, still working at your old job, noticing your old job changed its surroundings, cheating, ect.

You walked in late to a birthday party, a celebration. Do you feel you always miss out on happy times. Like your life could be filled with more fun? Yeah, it’s probably going to be a "yes" but that’s my interpretation of it anywho. But again, it only matters if you felt sad you missed out on the party. By your description, I doubt you were. You just seemed like, "Oh, there was a party here." Very nonchalant.

How did you feel when you felt you cheated on your boyfriend? Maybe you’re afraid you will cheat. Maybe deep down you really want to cheat.

"When I realized no real resolution was reached or full expression of his feelings were expressed, I noticed he had just gone back to using the computer. I was going to prompt him but I woke up."

So nothing was resolved, but he went back to the computer as if he didn’t care you may have cheated on him. Why were you going to prompt him, what were you going to ask? Were you angry that he wasn’t? Were you curious on where you two should go from there?

Honestly, I can’t tell much from your dream. Most likely it was a Release Dream (meaning your subconscious vents out frustrations) combined with a Wish Dream (what you hope will happen, what you want out of life).
Jewish FiLiPiNo | May 28, 2009

Chocolat

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 9:07 am

Chocolat
Chocolat (2000)

IMDB rating: 7.30

Plot: 1960, small town France. Vianne Rocher and her pre-teen daughter move into town and open a chocolate shop just as lent is beginning. The town’s small-minded mayor can’t accept this and does his best to shut her down, but her warm personality and incredible chocolates manage to win over many townsfolk. Things get shaken up even more when a group of river drifters, led by Roux, stop into town (to the even greater distress of the mayor) and Vianne takes up with him. Meanwhile, she’s been helping Josephine out of her abusive marriage and her equally freethinking landlord, Amande Voisin, get together with her grandson, Luc, whose mother doesn’t approve of Amande’s ways.

Directors: Hallstrom Lasse

Actors: Stormare Peter,Molina Alfred,Depp Johnny,Parent Koenig Aurelien,Gil-Martinez Antonio,Pratt Harrison,Connell Gaelan,Cook Ron,Tardieu Guillaume,O’Conor Hugh,Wood John,Comedy,Drama,Romance,

im looking for a good anime|manga?
these are the ones i read
1.Ayashi no Ceres
2.Angelic layer
3.Alice 19th
4.Aria
5.A kiss for my prince(i love this one)
6.Ai yori aoshi
7.Blue inferior
8.Chobits
9.Call me princess
10.Cardcaptor sakura
11.Cardcaptor sakura master of the claw
12.Captive hearts
13.Crimson hero
14.Chocolat (Shin)
15.Cynical orange(i love this one)
16.Dokebi bride
17.Dragon Knights
18.D.N Angel
19.fushigi yuugi genbu kaiden
20.Fruits basket(i love this one)
21.Full moon wo sagashite
22.Fall in love like a comic
23.Fushigi yuugi mysterious play
24.Girl got game(power)
25.Gakuen Alice(i love this one)
26.Gunslinger girl
27.Hana-kimi(i love this one)
28.Hot gimmick
29.HellGirl
30.Inuyasha
31.I.O.N.
32.Juvenile Orion(i love this one)
33.Kare moe
34.Kare Kano
35.Kaleido Star
36.Karin
37.kamichama karin
38.kamichama karin chu
39.Kare first love
40.kamikaze kaitou jeanne
41.Kamikaze Girls
42.Kitchen princess(i love this one)
43.Lovey dovey
44.Love hina
45.La Corda D’Oro
46.Line
47.mermaid melody pichi pichi pitch(i love this one)
48.Melancholy of haruhi
49.Merupuri(i love this one)
50.Miyuki-chan in Wonderland
51.Magic Knight Rayearth(i love this one)
52.Maximum Ride
53.Mermaid saga
54.Millennium snow
55.Mars
56.Neon genesis evangelion
57.Nana
58.Othello
59.Otomen(i love this one)
60.Ouran high school host club(i love this one)
61.Pretear(i love this one)
62.Princess tutu(i love this one)
63.Petshop of Horrors(i love this one)
64.Pretty Cure
65.Pita ten
66.Red river(i love this one)
67.Shugo chara
68.Sweet and sensitive
69.Swan
70.Sailor moon(i love this one)
71.S.A. special a(i love this one)
72.Short-Tempered Melancholic
73.Socrates in love
74.Tokyo mew mew (i love this one)
75.The Gentlemen’s Alliance Cross
76.Tail of the Moon(i love this one)
77.Tsubasa chronicles(i love this one)
78.Tsubasa, those with wings(i love this one)
79.Tenshi Ja Nai(i love this one)
80.Time Stranger Kyoko
81.Unearthly
82.Uzamaki
83.Very, Very Sweet(i love this one)
84.Vampire Knights(i love this one)
85.Wanted(i love this one)
86 XXXholic
87.Yes Pretty Cure

i dont like shonen…these are the ones i’m already planning on reading…

Hakushaku to Yosei
Sand chronicles
Backstage prince
+ANIMA
St. Dragon Girl
Saint Tale
The mythical detective Loki Ragnarok
Skip Beat
Honey Hunt
Cheeky angel
Absolute boyfriend
Land of the Blindfolded
Kodocha
Wild Ones
Kaze Hikaru
Yume Kira Dream Shoppe
The Cain saga
X/1999
Spy Goddess
Inubaka
Steady beat
Mixed vegetables
Bizenghast
Mamotte! Lollipop
Full House (1-)
Yurara (1-5)
Dream saga (1-5)

i like a little romance, fighting, fantasy, and i like the drawing for….

A kiss for my prince
Captive hearts
Cynical orange
Fruits basket
Full moon wo sagashite
Fall in love like a comic
Gakuen Alice
Hana-kimi
I.O.N.
Juvenile Orion
kamichama karin
kamikaze kaitou jeanne
Kitchen princess
mermaid melody pichi pichi pitch
Merupuri
Otomen
Ouran high school host club
Pretear
Princess tutu
Sailor moon
S.A. special a
Short-Tempered Melancholic
Tokyo mew mew
The Gentlemen’s Alliance Cross
Tsubasa, those with wings
Time Stranger Kyoko
Vampire Knights
Wanted

i like it when the main girl has long straight black hair, and has a tough atitude.skinny and white, and is pretty! and i like it when the main guy has blond hair, not too short, and is like a prince. smiles alot, kind, but can fight!
oh, i forgot! i read Popilon


I dont know since you read all the ones I was going to say.
I Liek Mudkipz

February 25, 2010

Astronaut’s Wife, The

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 9:35 am

Astronaut's Wife, The
Astronaut’s Wife, The (1999)

IMDB rating: 4.70

Plot: Astronaut Spencer Armacoust was on a mission when he suddenly lost contact. When he got home, to friends he was the same, but to his wife he was different. She becomes pregnant, but as time progresses she begins to feel like the lives inside of her are not of this world.

Directors: Ravich Rand

Actors: Depp Johnny,Morton Joe,Cassavetes Nick,Grubbs Gary,Noonan Tom,O’Brien Tom,Crider Michael,Stein Jacob,Wicker Timothy,Horror,Sci-Fi,Thriller,

POLL: Which one should I watch?
I’m watching all the Johnny Depp movies (:
Here’s the ones that are left:
Platoon
Arizona Dream
Dead Man
Nick Of Time
Donnie Brasco
The Brave
The Ninth Gate
The Astronaut’s Wife
The Man Who Cried
Before Night Falls
Chocolat
Blow
Ils se marierent et eurent beaucoup d’enfants
The Libertine


Please watch Chocolat next. It’s brilliant. (I take it you’ve seen Cry Baby and Benny and Joon? Those are my favorites other than Edward Scissorhands of Johnny Depp)

Bela Lugosi | Aug 12, 2009


HAVE U SEEN..PUBLIC ENEMIES THAT MOVIE IS BOMB!!
AND finally u asked a question that wasnt that retarted
LoyalKarla | Aug 12, 2009


Donnie Brasco, without a doubt.
fracture | Aug 12, 2009


If you are a fan of Johnny Depp you will love chocolat I went to see it with my sister and , she didn?t stop talking about Depp for a month.

The one that I would not watch is the libertine I found it very very boring
Rafael | Aug 12, 2009


Chocolat is really good!!
ridingforever | Aug 12, 2009


I like all his movies, but if I have to choose one, than you should watch "Nick of time". That’s one of my all time favorites…
Sandra_sk | Aug 12, 2009


dead man was funny and wierd. jim jarmush movies are neat, if you like dead man you might like down by law or night on earth
noselessman | Aug 12, 2009


Donnie Brasco.
beatle1909 | Aug 12, 2009

February 24, 2010

Victory Through Air Power

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 12:08 pm

Victory Through Air Power
Victory Through Air Power (1943)

IMDB rating: 7.20

Plot: This is a unique film in Disney Production’s history. This film is essentially a propaganda film selling Major Alexander de Seversky’s theories about the practical uses of long range strategic bombing. Using a combination of animation humorously telling about the development of air warfare, the film switches to the Major illustrating his ideas could win the war for the allies.

i find Victory Through Air Power DivX version and download

Directors: Algar James

Actors: de Seversky Alexander,Baker Art,Mitchell Billy,Documentary,Animation,HistoryWar,

Can you be a critic for a part of my story please?
Please tell me if its good or bad, don’t mind the vocabulary I try my best, I’m only 14. Thanks! (Sorry, it’s a tad long :S)

Chapter I

"They’re moving to a new target. At this rate, we won’t be able to catch them. We can’t let them destroy our society, it’s the only thing that keeps the human world in order…if they succeed we’re all is done for." The woman said anxiously. Her orange eyes flaring with saddness.
"Then, its time we call in the expert now isn’t it?" A female British voice inquired, you could here the smile in her voice. She sounded young, maybe in her 20’s. The sound of a door slamming shut was heard from the entrance, footsteps came down the murky hallway, and when the light hit her soft face, the man running the council stood from his chair knocking it over.
"Miss Teel, we thought wouldn’t see you again." He studdered bowing his bald head.
"I said I was busy not dying." She hissed taking a seat. "And here I am,"
"Well it’s completley an honor to be in your powerful presence." the same man smiled warmly.
"Who wouldn’t be honored?" She smirked drinking from the water they gave her."Now, tell me about this problem."
"Of course, Miss Teel, anything you say." The man cleared his throat and began. "Centuries ago a child named Vladin was born. His parents were part of the Annientamento Alliance, and as you all know they are our immortal enemies. Plus having to deal with other weaker enemies it exhausts our people. Making many of us ill or injured leading to death. When this child Vladin was older around 14 he learned more about his unique power of using shadows for any use. Hiding, attacking, anything really. After his first battle with one of our members his victory made him crave more destruction. More battles came and he kept getting stronger, and in one fight with one of Miss Teel’s ancestors, they made a bet, if Vladin lost he would give up all his powers making him weak and old. But if her ancestor died, she would end up giving him her immortality and her abilities. At the end, Vladin won, making him the most feared man by our society. He’s on the move with his crew now, destroying alliances, societies, or even a mere gang. We’re trying to stop them, but we have no plan, no power." He finished running his hand over his head as if he had hair.
"So that’s why you called me in. Fine tell me where I have to go and I’ll be there. I’ll have this case finished before you can say–"
"You won’t be doing this alone." The man said a bit nervous. Knowing Miss Teel she always worked alone, having someone accompany her was like teaching a snake to walk on two feet, two of which it didn’t have.
"What?!" She screamed hysterically standing abrutly slamming her hands on the table making her cup fall to the ground and shatter to pieces. "There is no possible way you can force me to work with someone."
"You have to!" The man shouted over every noise being made. "Our hidden world is in extreme danger and I won’t have this world dead just because of your selfishness! You’re one of the only ones that can stop this maddness!" He walked over to her and eyed her down easily. Her light green eyes fierce, but nothing could compare to his piercing black eyes.
"I could let this world rott for all I care." Was her only response, she looked away making sure not to look into his eyes. With one single attempt he snatched her face with one hand, making her fall into a trance, not a love trance, but a hypnotizing one. That was his ability–hypnotizing.
"Oh really? Would you let the man that killed your family get away with this?" He growled tightening his grip.
Her hand shot to his throat squeezing it until he let her go, his face turned red and when she let him go, he nearly fell to the ground gasping. "Touch me again, and you’ll have it worst. But fine, only because I feel like getting revenge. Show me this person I’ll be working with, give me the information." Her glance shot toward the woman with all the paperwork, expecting an answer.
"Uhh…" she ruffled through some papers eagerly. "His name is Terrance Willow, 20 years of age, ability is…empathy, sensing, and invisibility. He has three, that’s what makes him your partner."
"Hmm…interesting. When will I meet him?"
"He’s in the testing room."
"Great, my partner is being used as a guniie pig." She muttered making the guard lead her to the room. He opened the door revealing a testing room with a guy laughing reapearing and dissapearing making a guy that was running the tests in the same room become tense.
"Boo." her partner said invisible behind the guy making all his papers fly in the air. That killed him of laughter the next time he appeared he was rolling on the ground.
"Mr. Willow," the guard harrumphed catching his attention. He stood, brushed off his clothes, and walked over to them.
"I’m Juliet Teel, my ability is mimicking powers." She tried to attempt a smile but all that rang in her mind was ‘idiot’ and ‘immature’.
"
sorry, look that’s part one of my story ok action will come later! gosh…i forgot how mean critics are lol x] and i forgot how to spell guinie pig…maybe that’s how you spell it…


I think you have a great start, but you should really work on your grammar, spelling and the way you describe things. The storyline sounds very intriguing, but the way your telling it takes away some of its magic…

Im also writing a novel, and i find that its easier for me to see what im doing wrong or what i could describe more thoroughly if someone re-writes something i’ve written. Only in a way so that i see what i could change or improve. So, if you want i could do that for you.

Email me,
 Kasdeek at yahoo.com />

don’t worry, im not out to steal your ideas or anything that you have written. I just love helping other people who are trying to write, just like someone helped me just as i was about to give up on my own novel…

So, feel free to email me anytime. =)
-K

K | Aug 18, 2009


What’s a guniie pig?
Ferret Queen | Aug 18, 2009


wow that has to be the boringest (who cares if thats a word) thing i have ever read…jeez! PUT IN SOME ACTION

yawn

sorry
im being a critic

LOL im just kidding

and its correct spelling is:
guinea pig
<3 | Aug 18, 2009


I think it’s good, my favorite part is when she says "I said I was busy not dying." That’s funny :)
Shy_Girl | Aug 18, 2009


Sorry, but I got a little bored…
doodlebugs038 | Aug 18, 2009


Good, but there are a few things I’d change.

I would change "The woman said anxiously. Her orange eyes flaring with sadness." to something more like "The woman said anxiously, her orange eyes creasing with worry."

""Then, its time we call in the expert now isn’t it?" A female British voice inquired, you could here the smile in her voice."- What she says doesn’t sound like a question, so it doesn’t really make sense. I would try something more like this :
"Then its time to call the expert in, isn’t it?" remarked a cool female voice, touched with a faint British accent. It was easy to hear the smile in her voice."

"Stuttered," not "Studdered"

""Well it’s completley an honor to be in your powerful presence." the same man smiled warmly."- Firstly, ‘completely’ was spelled wrong. Next, it doesn’t really seem like something someone would actually say. "It is a high honor to be in your powerful presence." might be closer to what he would really say.

When you are talking about Vladin, I suggest that you don’t specify the age 14, try "mid-teens" instead, since I’m guessing that power comes on over the course of several years, and its unlikely that the precise year would be known.

"She smirked drinking from the water they gave her."- I would say: "She smirked at him from over the rim of a glass of water."

"The man said a bit nervous. Knowing Miss Teel she always worked alone, having someone accompany her was like teaching a snake to walk on two feet, two of which it didn’t have."-
The man said a bit nervous? Are you trying to say: "The man said nervously?" or "Said the man apprehensively?"
The next sentences might flow better if they were something more like:
"Knowing Miss Teel, he fully expected her outrage. She always worked alone, and assigning someone to accompany her was harder than asking a snake to walk on two legs… two legs it didn’t have.

Guinea pig, not guniie pig.

"She muttered making the guard lead her to the room. He opened the door revealing a testing room with a guy laughing reapearing and dissapearing making a guy that was running the tests in the same room become tense.":
It doesn’t make all to much sense, so something like this might be better:
"She muttered darkly, indicating for the guard to lead her. He unlocked a door, ushering her into an adjacent testing room. Inside, all that could be seen was a scientist sitting in a desk, his expression terrified. The seat before him was empty. Suddenly, a young man appeared briefly in the corner, before evaporating with a ghostly chuckle. The scientist shuddered."
(Also, fyi, don’t use the word "guy" in this type of writing, it sounds highly unprofessional and unpolished.)

Its very good overall- I really love the idea. I apologize for the roughness of my examples, but I figured that you would understand what I meant by them. Just read through it, insert commas here and there, fix what I mentioned, and nobody would ever be able to tell that it was written by a 14 year old! You are very talented- keep going with this story!

Good Luck,

-Nathalie
Nathalie | Aug 18, 2009

Demon Hunter

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 9:46 am

Demon Hunter
Demon Hunter (2005)

IMDB rating: 4.40

Plot: After resolving a situation of exorcism, the half-breed demon hunter Jake Greyman (Sean Patrick Flanery) reports to Cardinal White (William Bassett) and they realize that the demon Asmodeus (Billy Drago) is impregnating many mortals trying to raise offspring. Cardinal White calls Sister Sarah Ryan (Colleen Porch) to assist Jake in his hunting for Asmodeus and his women. Meanwhile, Asmodeus sends the delicious and sexy Succubus (Tania Deighton) to seduce Jake. A battle between good and evil is in course.

Demon Hunter

Directors: Ziehl Scott

Actors: Alonzo Robert,Baird Harlan,Bassett William,Beasor Terrence,Drago Billy,Flanery Sean Patrick,Howerton Charles,Nguyen Johnny,Nickens Gary,Perez Eddie,Horror,

How does my story sound?
I am only eleven, and I need some feedback. Here is an exerpt.
It sat on the large rock they had used for the offering. It

February 23, 2010

League of Their Own, A

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 11:13 am

League of Their Own, A
League of Their Own, A (1992)

IMDB rating: 6.90

Plot: In the farm of Oregon Dottie Henson and Kit Keller are working on the farm. Sisters that do love each other, except when it comes to baseball. Kit wants to play in the league but is upset to hear that it is Dottie who is chosen to play for the AAPGL. (All American Pro Girls League) Dottie refuses to play unless Kit can come along. AAPGL was only made because of the World War II and all of the man were in the war. Along the way to the stadium they meet Marla Hooch who is a great hitter, but to most people not the prettiest girl. When they are going to try out they meet Doris and Mae because Doris threw a baseball at Dottie who caught it impressing Doris. They girls find out their new manager is Jimmy Dugan. Jimmy Dugan drinks a lot and is the worst manager until Dottie get through to him and he becomes a better person. Miss Cuthbert makes sure the rules are followed, no boys, no drinking or smoking until Mae poisons her meal. The girls go to party and Marla who had been overlooked a lot is noticed by a guy named Nelson. Dottie’s husband Bob is in the army and when news comes that a man in the army has been killed it turns out to be Betty Spaghetti. After awhile, Kit feels that once again like at home she is behind Dottie’s shadow. Dottie notices it to and asks to be transferred to another team. Of course Mr. Lovitz doesn’t want the best player to be transferred so he has Kit transferred to Racine. Kit feels that Dottie did this on purpose. Kit plays for the Racine while Dottie plays for Rockford. In the final scene Dottie is crashed into by Kit and she drops the ball, letting Racine win, making Kit have her own stardom instead of being in Dottie’s shadow. The girls have a reunion and they remember the fun they had together.

find and download League of Their Own, A in DivX quaity

Directors: Marshall Penny

Actors: Hanks Tom,Lovitz Jon,Strathairn David,Marshall Garry,Pullman Bill,Davis Don S.,Comedy,Drama,Sport,

Should Champions League places ONLY go to?
League winners, runners up and FA Cup winners?

OQ: Which users here could become our sections very own A-Team, and who would they be?


no that is a terrible idea what happens when a team like hull or newcaslte get hot in the fa cup and wins and gets in to champions league they would be destroyed
PSU2010 | Feb 08, 2010


I’ve said it before over the years, and possibly on here too, that is exactly the criteria I’d use. It restores the importance of the domestic cups and would’ve stopped the oligarchy of the last six or seven years, as the CL money would’ve possibly been more equally distributed.
perfectlyflawed | Feb 08, 2010


Traditionally, the CL places should go to only the league winners. The domestic league is a long season marathon. All the time, the eventual winners are truely the real champions. Unlike in a Cup run, with a lot of hits and misses, unlikely winners will appear. No ones wants to see a Portsmouth like club playing in the CL.
With the expansion of the CL, it’s only fair for the league winners and runners up to qualify. Having said that, big clubs like Liverpool, Arsenal, Roma, Juventus missing the CL will be a travesty. Everyone wants to see the big clubs in the biggest tournament. I think the CL format is just fine as it is. Why fix something which is not broken?
jyoti | Feb 08, 2010


Nah – if it ain’t broke don’t fix it – each country should send their best

OQ: I’m not in favour of elites, there is not much to commend this place other than it’s egalitarian nature – Level 1 or 7 you still get to have your say.

February 22, 2010

Home Alone 4

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 5:56 am

Home Alone 4
Home Alone 4 (2002)

IMDB rating: 2.10

Plot: Kevin McCallister’s parents have split up. Now living with his mom, he decides to spend Christmas with his dad at the mansion of his father’s rich girlfriend, Natalie. Meanwhile robber Marv Merchants, one of the villains from the first two movies, partners up with a new criminal named Vera to hit Natalie’s mansion.

Directors: Rod Daniel

Actors: Stewart French,Beghe Jason,Mike Weinberg,Joanna Going,Clare Carey,Avari Erick,Comedy,Family,

Scarred Heart: A song I wrote. Please rate!?
I’m 15 years old, poetry/lyrics are just a side thing for me. I usually jot shit down when I’m bored, pissed off, or depressed. This is my first approach to something that wasn’t dark/gothic. Please rate it on a scale of 1-10 and if you have any criticism please fire away.

[INTRO]

Everything has fallen away from me.
Like a broken ship, I drift into the sea.
A sea of madness, a sea of sadness, time’s sand leaks through the hourglass.
This sand that which I speak of, is the threads of me that tear.
After you turned your back on me and insulted me, I would think you didn’t care.

I tell these rhymes to reminisce the times that which we spent together.
Even during the harsh and stormy weather; there was always a way you made me feel better.
Now you are gone, and this is true; these words don’t express what I feel for you.
How did this happen to me? Baby can’t you see we were meant to be?

CHORUS x2: Should I end it all? Will I crash and fall? Darling, I would die for you! Please come back to me, and cure my scarred heart before it rips in two!

I beg you so mercifully, take me back; back to Square 3.
Square one was when we met and talked in the bar.
Square two was when we had sex in the car.
And square three was when we got along, and lived so happily.
Now I’m left home all alone,
With nothing but this song to sing
I’m so numb, I can’t tell if I should be crying

I still love you, but some things are better off not said
I thought about taking Russian Roulette to my head.
There’s nothing left for me here, I’d rather be dead.
Like Autumn leaves, you fly away.
Long and gone into another day.
I’ll sit here in darkness unhappily

But I will always remember the time we had before I hurt you
I was so blind, the way I let myself desert you
There is nothing I can say
That will convince you of my ways
Only thing I can do now is sit here and fade

CHORUS: Should I end it all? Will I crash and fall? Darling, I would die for you! Please come back to me, and cure my scarred heart before it rips in two! Whoooa-ooh!

I guess it’s come to this,
the exact opposite of bliss
Just know I always loved you
Especially your soft kiss, baby

Sitting on the porch, it’s 4:00 at night
After sitting here and thinking I realized that you were right
There was a monster inside of my head
But not the kind you find under your bed
The one you find in your heart
When its black and cold and torn apart

My mind is like a violent hurricane
And you were like the tranquil eye that is peaceful like a lullaby
I overdosed myself on Tylenol and still I felt the pain
Sometimes I feel like I’m in a mental hospital when you know you aren’t insane
Sometimes I feel like I’m in a pit of lions, when you know you won’t survive
Picture yourself on the side of a steep cliff, wondering if you should dive
It’s not so easy

CHORUS x2: Should I end it all? Will I crash and fall? Darling, I would die for you! Please come back to me, and cure my scarred heart before it rips in two! Whooooa-ooh!

You were to me as the sun is to the beach
But now I’m drowning in the ocean and I’m out of your short reach
Like an elegant flower is to a blossomed branch
Just like the broad stallion to a ranch
A yin to a yang, a sound to a bang
Understand I see us as one
Just like the pale moon and the shining sun

Taking a stroll around the park, and its late at night
Trying to fill my head with those good memories, not the times we had to fight
I feel like a lost child, or an orphan without someone to care for
My heartstrings are coming undone
I’m trapped in an everlasting war
The weight of the world on my shoulders feels more than a hundred ton
I looked on the dresser and there it was
In my two shaking hands I held the gun…

[SOLO]

CHORUS x4 and fades: Should I end it all? Will I crash and fall? Darling, I would die for you! Please come back to me, and cure my scarred heart before it rips in two!

Speaking: I still love you baby, and I will always and forever. You were my everything…

[END]
Yeah, this is a rough draft you could say. I’ll be making some minor fixes. Crestfallen is a good word by the way, I might use it.
Nicnac: Thanks for rating it. Doubt I’ll ever have music to go with it though, I’m more into death metal believe it or not ;) . Haven’t got a band going yet unfortunately.
Blissfully Obvious: It isn’t based on a true life experience, just feelings I felt at the moment (or a few moments). The line about sex I couldn’t think of anything else to rhyme that would stick with the so called "squares," but I will look to change it. And the reason I used lines like "overdose on Tylenol or russian roulette" is to represent deep pain or suicidal love. If you had seen other stuff I write — totally different. I’ll consider taking those comparison lines out or moving them, probably a good idea. Thanks for all the great feedback, especially the criticism. You should add me and maybe I’ll post some other stuff later on ;) .
Ben B: This I would NOT consider being dark poetry, but its all good. Thanks for the feedback man.
Zjohnson: I was thinking a slow guitar song with piano. I realized its a lot of lines, its supposed to be long. Thanks for the feedback.


That’s really good. Though you might want to add some more describing words like crestfallen.
Sammy | Feb 08, 2010


i like this song. i thought you did a really good job. i think it would be cool to hear the music to this if u have any yet. if not, i definetly think this song should be known. show it to some people.
one tiny thing i noticed was in the line "there was a monster inside of my head" i though it would sound better if u took out the "of". but i really thought this was a good song.
Nicnac | Feb 08, 2010


This is amazing, simply amazing. I’ve always wanted to write lyrics for a song, but I’ve never been successful. Your talent is shown through this piece, though. Although it’s quite sad, if you can sing and play an instrument (guitar or piano would be nice), I would suggest making a video of this song because it’s really awesome.

I do, however, have a critiques for this piece, but they aren’t major suggestions. First, if this is based off of a true relationship, I think you might want to rephrase the line where you say, "Square two was when we had sex in the car." To me and to pretty much any girl, it seems like you’re showing off that you have had sex. I mean, not to be rude or anything, but this line really ruined that portion of the piece. When I read literature, I’m looking for good writing, not a story about someone’s sex life. That’s just me, though. Perhaps you could change it to another situation where you and your significant other were doing something else. I apologize for not being clear here, but I wasn’t a part of the relationship, so I can’t really give you an example. If you ever snuck out and were rebellious for a night, that might be a better change.

Another revision I would make is when you said, "Sitting on the porch, it’s 4:00 at night." Again, it’s minor, but I don’t understand if you’re trying to say 4am or 4pm. One is the morning and the other is the afternoon/evening, so the whole ‘night’ part is throwing me off.

The last critique I have is on this part, "Like an elegant flower is to a blossomed branch
Just like the broad stallion to a ranch." It just doesn’t seem to fit where you have it. It’s great imagery-wise, but it sort of takes away from the helpless mood where you have it now. Perhaps you could still keep these lines, but move them to a better place.

This piece has so many positive elements about it, but I just want to mention a few that really stood out to me. "I overdosed myself on Tylenol and still I felt the pain," I am completely in love with this line. I’m not sure exactly what makes it so strong and emotional for me, but it’s just really great. I also liked these lines a lot, "In my two shaking hands I held the gun…" and "(speaking) I still love you baby, and I will always and forever. You were my everything…" These lines just really brought the whole piece together for me, but as I said before, I love this piece because it’s amazing.

There aren’t that many young men who write, so I think you should pursue this. I’m just a year younger than you, but I feel like you’re a way better writer than me. With this piece, you could really go places and I mean it. I honestly haven’t seen a piece like this on Yahoo Answers in a while now, so it’s nice to know that awesome writers are still out there.

I hope this helps and keep writing! <3
Blissfully oblivious | Feb 08, 2010


Man that was deep and it hit me hard almost like every dark poetry I read cuz most are abou suicide ad I’ve experienced it before but it wasn’t planned suicide I just simply love it
Ben B | Feb 08, 2010


really really awesome and amazing. now it depends on how you put the music to it. i will have to say it is exretemly long for a song unless its fast paced!! other than that, its amazing
zjohnson | Feb 08, 2010

February 21, 2010

Lean on Me

Filed under: Uncategorized — mauricebass1982 @ 11:15 pm

Lean on Me
Lean on Me (1989)

IMDB rating: 7.10

Plot: An extraordinary situation calls for an extraordinary solution. At strife-torn Eastside High School in Paterson, New Jersey, that solution had a name: Principal “Crazy Joe” Clark. With a bullhorn in one hand and a baseball bat in the other, he slammed the door on losers at Eastside. Brought in as a last resort to stop the state government from taking control of the school, Clark chained the doors shut to keep troublemakers OUT and achievers IN. Parents fought him. Teachers resented him. Even his own boss doubted him. But lots of kids loved him. Clark turned Eastside around, appearing on the cover of “Time Magazine” and becoming a national symbol of tough-love education. “If you don’t succeed in life,” Clark tells his students, “don’t blame your backgrounds. Don’t blame the Establishment. Blame YOURSELVES.” His message is simple: Don’t lean on excuses, drugs, crime, or anger. LEAN ON ME…and learn.

Directors: Avildsen John G.

Actors: Freeman Morgan,Guillaume Robert,North Alan,Beach Michael,Phillips Ethan,Hopkins Jermaine ‘Huggy’,Drama,

Can anyone help me annotate this a few stanzas (from The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock)…?
I really need some help annotating a few stanzas from the poem "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock"…I’ve read the poem over a few times, but I have having some difficulties when trying to annotate these few stanzas (the more detail, the better). Any help would be greatly appreciated:

Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
And watched the smoke that rises from the pipes
Of lonely men in shirt-sleeves, leaning out of windows? . . .
I should have been a pair of ragged claws
Scuttling across the floors of silent seas.

And the afternoon, the evening, sleeps so peacefully!
Smoothed by long fingers,
Asleep. . . tired . . . or it malingers,
Stretched on the floor, here beside you and me.
Should I, after tea and cakes and ices,
Have the strength to force the moment to its crisis?
But though I have wept and fasted, wept and prayed,
Though I have seen my head [grown slightly bald] brought in upon a platter,
I am no prophet–and here’s no great matter;
I have seen the moment of my greatness flicker,
And I have seen the eternal Footman hold my coat, and snicker,
And in short, I was afraid.

-Thanks

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